Feedback from our class on our 2 minute sequence

From the feeback from our class it was clear that people liked the idea however there was some reservations that we need to overcome. These are as follows:

1) Our acting needs to be good or it could look quite ammeter
2) Going to have to make it look obvious with the pizza man otheriwse it will be confusing what the narrative is about
3) Very reliant upon non diegetic sound


Therefore we have these issues to overcome and we will do so by doing the following:
1) We are going to film a run through first to practice
2) We are going to look for the right location
3) We are going to look on premier pro for the right non diegetic phone to create the right ambiance